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Advantages and disadvanges of living in city
Advantages:First, we can receive better education;second,we can enjoy systematic social welfare and social security;third,we can enjoy various entertainment facilities to relax ourselves after a whole day's work.
Disadvantages:first,there are many traffic jams;second, the environmental pollution is very serious which also do great harm to people;third,the living rhythe is to rapid,so people have great mental strain,therefore,many people are experiencing sub-health conditions.

Advantages and disadvantages of living in the city
The advantages of living in the city are that we can recieve better education,it's easiler for us to go the super markets and shopping malls...Also, if you live in a city, your network will be way better than if you are living out side of a city.
but still, there are also disadvantages. One of the disadvantages of living in the city is the traffic jams. For example, the traffic jams