这3句英文对么?帮我看看有没有语法错误吧

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/16 19:42:46
1 Not bend eyes on people you speak to but focus on something else betrays your neglect, cold or absent-minded manner.
2 Fix your eyes on people with smile means you are matey and fix your eyes on people with frown express your worry or sympathy.
3 Know these rules helps to start eyes contact with someone you are interest in.

谢谢大家拉我英文实在太不好啦

不得不说一句,楼上的两个把not改成don't的建议,都是不对的。
应该是"not bending...but focusing...",这里not..but...是并列结构,把用动名词形式做动宾式主语比较好。

不介意的话,我来帮你修改一下吧。除了一些动词、动名词、单复数的小错误外,我觉得还有更顺畅的方式表达你的意思。
另:我不是特别清楚bend的所有用法,但真的没有见过用在眼神上的。

1 Focusing on something other than the people you speak to betrays your neglect, cold or absent-minded manner.

2 Looking at people with smile means you are matey, and looking at people with frown expresses your worries or sympathy. 我不知道你是不是要用fix代表什么强烈的“盯着”之类的意思,但look at显得更自然、更常用一些。

3 Knowing these rules well would help you have better eye contact with someone you are interested in.

1.not->Don't
2.express->expresses
3.contact->to contact
interest->interested