请精通英语语法的高手进来帮我看看好吗?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/04/30 18:52:58
"Because people living in my town still hold a thought, which is not only traditional, but also ridiculous, of that only a man can carry on the family line."
我上面的这个表达对吗?which is not only traditional, but also ridiculous是插入语.of that only a man can carry on the family line是thought的同位语.我想问一下这样行吗?谢谢大家!

句子太长,而且结构不清楚。不妨参考以下:
Because people living in my town still hold a thought that only a man can carry on the family line, which is not only traditional, but also ridiculous。