下面这段话有错吗M Y JOB AND MY LIFE

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I have been in Shanghai since I was born. After graduated from unversity, I became a office worker in a small company. Although this is my first job, I has met a lot of problems of myself. I can not sure I like the job or not. Anyway, I think I should do it well before find the job what I want to do.

I m living in Shanghai since I was born. After my graduation from unversity, I worken as a office clerk in a small company. It was my first job, I encountered a lot of problems of myself. I am not sure whetherI like the job or not. Anyway, I will try my best on current job before I find a new one.
尽可能没有语法错误，而且，要是你的实际英语能力还比较可以的话，最好把你的这段话写得更出彩一些。

有几处错误，修改如下：
I have been in Shanghai since I was born. After graduating from the unversity, I became an office worker in a small company. It is my first job and I have met a lot of problems. I am not sure whether I like the job or not. Anyway, I think I should do it well before finding the job I want to do.

前面部分没有问题！
Although this is my first job, I has met a lot of problems of myself. I can not sure I like the job or not. Anyway, I think I should do it well before find the job what I want to do.
改为：Although this is my first job, I have met a lot of problems in my work. I'm ont sure whether I like this job o