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Dear Sir or Madam:
I am looking for the position as an English teacher in your school.
I am a college student of ××× university, major in English education. I will graduate from college four months later. I have strong interested in this field, I have some experience in English teaching skills with my outstanding record at college have prepared me for the position.
I am a mature and honest person with a stable personality and high sense of responsibility and process the ability to work independently and flexibly even under high pressure and time limitation.
During my college life. I have received professional training in English teaching skills and have developed a good ability in speaking, listening, writing, translation and teaching. As a result, I know well the common problems of these students and how to adapt teaching to achieve the best results. I worked as a practice teacher in ××× Primary school for a
建议：你的语法错误不是很多，但用词不够妥贴，比较中式化，提几点小建议。
i am applying for the .....I will graduate from college in 4 month.i am strongly intested in.....and have some experience in English teaching,my outstanding record at college also make me qualifed for the position.
i am a maturely honest person with fortitude personality and high sense of responsibility,able to work independently and flexibly even under high pressure.
developed a good ability of .... As a result, I know the common problems of these students and how to teach them well.
I (have) worked as a practice teacher in ××× Primary school for a month.
thanks for ..... I would appreciate greatly if you give.....
亲爱的先生或者夫人：
我正寻找在你的学校的一名英语老师的职位。 我一大学生 ⊙⊙⊙ 大学，主修英国教育。 我4 个月以后将从学院毕业。 我对这领域强壮感兴趣，我有在英语教学技能与我杰出记录一起的一些经验在学院已经使我准备好位置。 我是 有稳定的人格和高的责任心的一个成熟和诚实的人和处理独立而灵活甚至在高压和时间限制下工作的能力。 在我的学院生命期间。 我已经得到用英语教学技能的专业训练并且已经在讲话，听，写，翻译和教过程中发展一个好能力。 因此，我知道得好这些学生的普通问题和怎样使教取得最好的结果适应。 我作为一名实践教师工作在里 ⊙⊙⊙ 一个月的小学和