帮忙翻译几句话 请不要用机器翻译 高分悬赏

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“这次比赛给我提供了为奥运服务的机会，因此我的奥运宣言是：同一个世界同一个梦想，奥运与我同行！”
很简单的几句话 希望翻译的贴切的高手帮忙 在线等 200分献上
This competition has provided the opportunity to me which serves for Olympic Games, therefore my Olympic Games manifesto is: The identical world identical dream, Olympic Games travel together with me
这样可不可以？ 有没有什么明显的语法错误呢

外语大学教的:应该够贴切了：the compitition gives me a chane to work for the olympics.therefore my olympic slogan is OHE World.one dream and fly with the olymeics.

第一句不需要用完成时
serve 是及物动词，后面不加“to”
“宣言”用“slogan”更贴切，且slogan不需要复杂的语法，简单的几个词就好。

The compitition gave/offered me a chance to work for the Olympics, so my slogan is: one world one dream, the olympics is with me.

this game give me a chance to serve for the olympic game，so my declaration of olympic is one world，one dream，olympic with me．

give me a chance 给我机会
olympic game奥林匹克运动会

This match provide me with the opportunity to serve the Olympic Games,so my declaration is:One World One Dream and the Olympics go with me

this game give me a chance to serve for the olympic game，so my declaration of olympic is one world，one dream，olympic with me．

This match provide a chance for me to service Olympic Games, so my Olympic declaration is:One world one dream,Olympic Games with me to go to