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When people become angry ,they hve many different reactions .

First ,much people cry loudly and heartily toward their anger .Some crys his eyes out ,others explain tearfully,and shy people weep usually on hiding in a dak place where nobody find .crying can let them to think back all happens who make them angry, it can also help to forget their angers .

In addition ,when irascible people become angry ,their attitude become out of control and they some abnormal actions .Fo example ,they smash the window ,shout loudly ,throw clothes or even fight with the othes .Those actions are negative for their living condition and the relation ship with the others ,but that can also help angry people to relax
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Finnaly ,there are also a lot of people who can control their attitude very well .When they become angry,they just do some interesting thing on poducing pressure .For example ,the swimming amateus stay in swimming pool during many hours ,they swim on ex

When people become angry ,they hve(have) many different reactions .

First ,much(many(people其实是可数的)) people cry loudly and heartily toward their anger .Some crys his(their) eyes out ,others explain tearfully,and shy people weep usually on hiding in a dak(dark) place where nobody find(usually weep their tears in hidden place where nobody can find) .crying can let them to(let sb. do sth去掉to) think back all happens who make them angry, it can also help to forget their angers .

In addition ,when irascible people become angry ,their attitude become out of control and they (will behave with)some abnormal actions .Fo(for) example ,they smash the window(去掉the变成windows) ,shout loudly ,throw clothes or even fight with the othes .Those actions are negative for their living condition and the relation ship with the others ,but that can also help angry people to relax