我写的一篇小短文,可是朋友说单词和语法都有错误,谁帮我检查一下?

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Time goes by so quickly.More than seven months had gone by since last august.During this time I study hard because i don't want to leave a pity in my hight school life.
Often,I yearn much for the last summer and miss my friends.But I know that the past time is gone,never to return.
It'll be the university entrance examination in three months.Though I really don't know what the result will be,I'll do my best.

我的中文原意:时间过得很快,从去年八月开始到现在已经过了七个多月,在这段时间里我努力地学习,因为我不想在我的高中生涯中留下遗憾。
我常常很想念去年的夏天、想念我的朋友,但我知道 过去的时间已经过去,不再回头。
三个月后就要高考了,虽然我真的不知道结果将是怎样,但我会尽我最大的努力。

How time flies !There are more than 7 months since last August.During these days,I bear dowm in my study to refuese pity in the time of my senior secondary school.
I always yearn last summer and miss my friends,but the lost time has gone and couldn't return again.
I'll join the university entrance examination in 3 months later.though I don't know the how the result will be run,I'll try my best!