帮忙 修改 英语

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帮忙修改下这篇英语,比如语法或者表达的问题,用于口语演讲
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My hometown in XXX. There, have retained a lot of ancient house and ancient alley of the people, classical scent is strong. But it is burgeoning to have taken a lot of new house and modern shopping centre. XXX have many tides Shan well-known snack. For example:Jieyang pingpangguo. Still have a lot famous food. For example: Tongkeng noodles. The feelings of human nature of there are gentle , treat person kindly. It is a very beautiful place to Jieyang. No matter in before , in now , still in after.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful 。

My hometown (is) in XXX. It retains a lot of ancient house and ancient alley of the people and its classical scent is strong. But it is burgeoning a lot of new houses and modern shopping centres. XXX has many tides Shan well-known snack. For example:Jieyang pingpangguo,which still has a lot famous food. For example: Tongkeng noodles. The feelings of human nature there are gentle , treating person kindly. It is a very beautiful place, which it was and it will still be.
I love my hometown and I love its people more. They are working hard so as to make it much richer and more beautiful 。

语病真多,你都是用中国语法下去翻译的啊..真汗....

My hometown is in XXX. There, still retained a lot of ancient house and ancient alley, the classical scent is strong there.
But now it is burgeoning a lot of new house and modern shopping centre here. XXX have many tides Shan and many well-known snacks. For example:Jieyang pingpangguo. Still there are a lot of famous food. For example: Tongk