帮忙检查1下语法错误

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/26 16:56:12
Dear :

Because I, you will be the world's most well-being of the people.
Believe me, I will have all my love to give you the whole,
Please do not think my love for you is a trifling matter
You know that this way I think it would be very distressed.?
I dare not say that I will love you after one
Or I in the near future I will become heart
But I want to tell you, every moment, at this very moment, I think you always have.
Please seriously, and I urge you to earnestly deal with
I believe in your love I will be properly nurtured under this mid-term examinations do well!
Because you and I will Bianguai
Please give me a chance
Just this once.!

The love yours

第一行 because of me
第三行 my love to you
第四行 this way 和i think 调换位置
第七行 tell you 后接that
第八行deal with 接it
第九行believe in your love后加and do well改为doing well
文章最后一行just this once 改为just this chance
最后the love yours去掉the
这个应该是某人写给你的信吧?估计还有一点点的错误,实在是没办法改了,错的多的地方没改,因为写信的人的心情我还体会不到啊 呵呵

我倒觉得是你写给别人的~!