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My family
My family is very big. My family has many meber. My mother is accountant,we are very close. She know me is very.
My father is very funny,he is computer engineer,he is good at computer.
My grandmather is kind,she can be very tasty dishes speculation.my grandmather is a very good cook.my grandfather is good cook too!
My grandma is very like read books. My grandpa told me very good,but he die,I’m very sad.
I have six cousin.our cousins are clise to each other.
I’m very love my family!

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My family
My family is a big one with many members. My mother is an accountant,and she's close to me. Of course, she knows me a lot. And my father can be called fun-loving, he is a program-designer, who is always good at computer.
As for my grandmather, she is kind. She's old but good at thinking, and we communicate a lot. What's more,she is a very good cook as well as my grandfather.
My grandma likes reading books and grandpa thought of me as a very good child,but he died. I’m very sad about that.
In my family, I have six cousins, each of whom is frank to the others, making our family harmonous.
I love my family so much!