这篇英语短文有错吗?..帮我看下..

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/24 23:59:26
During the winter,it often snows in the north of China.In most places of South China,the winter is not so cold.But this year,things were quite difficult.South China met heavy snow.In some places;there was so much snow on the road and it was difficult for people to walk.The cars,buses and trucks couldn't move,either.It was just before the Spring festuval.Many people at on their way home.But the heavy snow made them stay on the bus or the train for a long time. The heavy snow and ice also caused power off in many places.it made people's life more difficult,but we helped people were not afraid of it.We are each other and overcame the difficult Chinses last.

were quite difficult-diffierent
at on their way home-at 去掉
on the bus-in the bus
最后几句根本不通，没法改都

there was so much snow on the road——too much更好
Many people at on their way home.——Many people were on their home
but we helped people were not afraid of it——不太明白你的意思。but people were not afraid of it.
We are each other and overcame the difficult Chinses last.——同样不是很明白。We helped each other and overcame the difficulties together.

整篇文章读起来像绕口令，内容意思没有问题，但前后句子非常不流畅。语法错误很多，还有单词拼错，看似像小学水平写的英文作文。

评价有点难听，不过这是事实。不要随便将很多不会的词组从字典里照搬，尽量使用自己懂的方式去写，效果会好很多。