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你好.我是**.家在吉林长春.初中已经毕业.并参加完了中考.而且取得了很优异的成绩.目前已经被一所重点的高中录取.
我已经在中国有很好的条件,但是我还向申请去美国白石中学念高中.因为我想,我可以去国外开阔眼界,去接触各种各样的文化.所以以后在中国会有更好的发展.

我已经被拒签过4次,对此我认为这是一种对我人生和生活的考验,对此我并不气馁.

Hello.I'm **.Live in Jinlin Changchun.Now I have graduated from middle school.I had took part in the middle school exam
and had gotten great pride.At present I was admitted to a very famous high school in China.
So my future in China will be very good.But I want to go to America to study.Because I think,I can look up my eyes,and contect more curture.I
think i can get a good place in China in the future.

I have been rejected four times.But I think that a good experience for me,so i don't get nerous.
有错的地方帮指出来~谢谢

Hello.I am a junior middle school graduate who live in changchun city of Jilin province in China.I have just taken part in the high school entrance examination and I have been admitted to a key middle in China.
As you see ,I now have good condtions in China。But I want to go to US for further study,by which I can broaden my horizons and touch other cultures,so that I will have juicier future in China。
I have been rejected four times。but I will never give up。I think this is a importent lesson in my life and I will benifit from it a lot。Please believe in me and I will perform well。

Living in Jinlin Changchun,now I have graduated from middle school.I have taken part in the middle school exams
and have did a good performance. At present I have been admitted by a very famous high school in China.
So my future in China will be very good.But I want to go to America to study.Because I think,it can broaden my horizons,and i can have access to other cultures .I