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Love is really so perfect ?no ,it seems that is does not

esitance forever.No one can deny the fact that the love's

thing is a dream.
For instance , my experice is wendful which tells me in the

world there is not love in fact.In the past i love one of my

friends very much ,however she is not concerned about me.
I feel that she make use of me ,which makes me very sad

,In short,it can be said that i am fool .A few weeds in love.
Perhaps life playing a joke on me ,IN these days i am(look)

thin and slim.Of course Ifeel hurt in my heart,because of

seeing her in trouble.
It may be briefly summed up as follows.she is smart and

maturous ,but i am fool and shortsighted. i did not want to
connect with all womem,i have no interest in it .Study interest

is necessary for me.I am tired of this kind of girl.

Love is really so perfect? No, it seems that does not exist forever. No one can deny the fact that the love's thing is a dream(没看懂意思). For instance , my experience is wonderful which tells me in the world there is no love in fact. In the past I loved one of my friends very much, however she was not concerned about me. I felt that she was making use of me, which made me very sad. In short,Maybe I was a fool. A few weeds in love(没看懂意思). Perhaps life was playing a joke on me. In those days, I looked thin and slim. Of course I feel hurt in my heart because of seeing her in trouble. It may be briefly summed up as follows, she is smart and mature, while I am fool and shortsighted. I did not want to associate it with all women, I have no interest in it. Study interest is necessary for me. I am tired of this kind of girl.