英语求职申请, 帮忙修改下! 谢!

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/18 04:04:09
Nowdays C.A. play a serious role in company. To this job, apperance is not the most important factor.If i can get this chance, I'll put all my energy into my passengers. and i'll use my rest time to practise and improve my skills of service. i'll keep my professional quality, Because every actions will influence our image. and we represent our company. soit is really important. i'll study from my olders modestly, making progress, contribute to my company
People always get happiness from working, I'll share it to every one around me.

请帮我看看有没有语发错误, 句子是否连惯, 这个申请很重要. 可以加或去些不合适的句子. 非常感谢! 如果满意还会另外再给您加20分!
我想表达的中文:

今天的空姐被时代提高到前所未有的高度, 对空姐这一职业也不再着眼于你是否美丽,如果我有幸得到这份工作,首先, 我会全心全意把热情倾注给我的乘客, 同时,我也要利用闲暇时间丰富自己的专业技能,其次,维护好自己的职业形象,任何一个小的举动都会影响到乘客对我们的印象.而我们又代表着公司的形象,所以这至关重要.第三,我会虚心的像前辈学习,不断的完善自己.为公司的发展贡献自己的力量.
工作的人永远是快乐年轻的, 我要把这份快乐传递给身边的每个人

谢谢, 不用克意驻字翻译. 通顺很重要. 非常感谢

Nowdays C.A. plays a pretty serious role in a company. To this job, apperance is not the most important factor in my mind.If i could get this chance, I'll devote all my energies into my passengers.Using my leisure time to practise and improve my skills of service.Besides,keeping ones professional quality is also critical because every action will influence our image.More importantly,it's us who represent our company directly.With the faith above,I'll study from obeying my olders modestly in order to make self-progress and contribution to my company.
Working makes people younger and happier, I'll surely share the happiness with everyone around me.
修改了一下 这样就没问题啦 祝你成功哦

我建议你把想要表达的中文意思写出来。这个英文写得确实不怎么样啊~

我根据你提供的中文重新整理翻译如下：

(其中个别地方为了使语句顺利并且表达起来流畅，根据你中文的意思，不作大更改的前提下做了一些调整)

People's expect towards C.A today has become more than just beauty appearance. If I am lucky to be trusted with this job, the first thing I will do is