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“Journey to Nunavut: The Kreelak Story” is a short movie directed by Ole Gjerstad and Martin Kreelak in 1999. It tells us the story about a three generations Inuit family (which is probably the last Canada’s nomads), their early life as hunters until today, where young adults grow up in government-created settlements. I agree that Martin Kreelak has done a very good job by pointing out, in the movie, a very serious problem: assimilation.

First of all, the Canadian residential school system in 19th-20th century shows clearly an effort to assimilate aboriginal people into mainstream Canadian society. The system consisted of schools especially for aboriginal children set up by Anglican, Catholic and Presbyterian churches. A major problem of residential school is that some young boys and girls who attended residential school were physically or sexually abused. In 2008, the government made a statement to apologize to these people. In the movie, Martin Kreelak talks about his own

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