帮我修改下错误

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/17 00:10:34
In the process of serving for my classmates,I completely built up the ability to organize and the communication skills.

serving后的for应该去掉,只能说serve sb,为...服务

According to serving for my classmates,I completely built up the ability of organization and communication skills.

同意二楼的观点,for去掉,一楼的你在改什么