(英语)高手看看短文有错么?

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Everyone has a dream. Now I want to say something about my dream. What is my dream? I often ask myself.In fact, my dream is to become a teacher.you know being a teacher is a thing that is very difficult and very interesting. i think that it must be a great fun to be with children all the day.
china is a developing country. chinese are not that excellent in their intellegent. so teachers in china might be very very important. they can provide the society with a lot of successful people, and make china a better place.
do you think that i have a good dream？ i will work hard to make my dream become true!
thanks~

say something about - tell you about
in fact - the fact is that
a thing - a job
a great fun - great fun
all the day - all the time / all day
Chinese - the Chinese people
are not that excellent in their intellegent - still have a long way to go when it comes to knowledges
might be - are
provide the society with a lot of successful people - provide the society with a lot of well-informed youth

我不是英语高手，但你可以看一下：
I often asks myself.
my dream is to be a teacher.
It is diffcult to be a teacher, but I think that is a very interesting.
I think that is important to keep the classes funny.
So the teachers in China may be very very important.
and make China become better.

Everyone has a dream. Now I want to say something about my dream. What is my dream? I often ask myself.In fact, my dream is to become a teacher.you know being a teacher is a thing which is very difficult but very interesting. i think that it mus