UC知道帮我检查有没有语法错误.谢谢
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First of all, our market is based on income. From the number of on-line shopping and the amount of shopping, more women than men interested in shopping on the Internet.
Please look at the data chart, you can see that women buy baby products, the ratio of the second row again, baby supplies and the total volume of 7%. Together with the baby supplies store electronic market competitiveness of small. It has room for development and profit is substantial. Therefore, in view of this situation, our group decided to develop an electronic baby supplies store. Name: love.
We have the following four characteristics.
First, the restaurant's products, low prices, wide variety.
Second, to pay security.
Third, attentive service.
Fourthly, We provide child-care knowledge to help you better take care of the baby.
Then our sales staff to introduce you to our goods.
Good, Our products not only lower than 60% of the market, but you made time-saving, eas
Please look at the data chart, you can see that women buy baby products, the ratio of the second row again, baby supplies and the total volume of 7%. Together with the baby supplies store electronic market competitiveness of small. It has room for development and profit is substantial. Therefore, in view of this situation, our group decided to develop an electronic baby supplies store. Name: love.
We have the following four characteristics.
First, the restaurant's products, low prices, wide variety.
Second, to pay security.
Third, attentive service.
Fourthly, We provide child-care knowledge to help you better take care of the baby.
Then our sales staff to introduce you to our goods.
Good, Our products not only lower than 60% of the market, but you made time-saving, eas
more women than men are/become interested in
It has space for development and the profit is substantial
We have the following four characteristics.
---------we have four advantages over the others
这是你自己写的吧
不怎么地道
还有一些我没时间看了