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Finally, there are two open discussions concerning the effects of juvenile delinquency on society. Some people believe/think that juvenile delinquency will eventually destroy the harmony of the society and lead to chaos. Therefore they suggest that young offenders should be put away so that they'll learn the serious consequences of their actions. However, others don't agree with that opinion. They think that although juvenile offenders do have impact on the general public, sometimes even cause fear, they are still too young to be put in jail. Instead they should be given the opportunity to learn from their mistakes. So these people's opinion is that young offenders should do community service instead of serving time in prison.

Finally, there are two opposite points of view as to the effects of juvenile delinquency on society. Some people think that juvenile delinquency lead to chaos and destroy the harmony of society, and therefore young offenders should be put int