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Going on a diet
Many years ago,people do not have enough food to eat.They can not image that human beings would go on a diet in nowadays.It is a joke.But this situation really exists in our daily life .A lot of girls refuse to eat meat in order to lose weight .They think that “the less weight,the more beauty”.Pelple have different views about it . Some support it ,while others disagree with it.
The words say “Everybody has the mind of beauty”. However,going on a diet too much is harm to our health.Fat,meat,sugar and so on are important to keep our body’s balance ,if we don’t take them for a long time ,we will be lack of nutrition ,and don’t have enough energy for study and work..What’s more , we may get stomach desiase if eating very less.
In total,healthy is more important rather than so-called beauty.
1，开头说“many years ago”,那么接下来的动词就不可以用一般式了，应该改为过去式，语法中所言“事态要一致”。“do not ”改为 “didn't” “can not” 改为“couldn't”
2，“in nowadays”，改为“now”就行了，不要太复杂,因为前面没有写“history”。
3，在第二段开始的那句中“say”应改为过去式“said”，因为是已经说了的话。
4，最后一句中的“rather than”意思是：与其...倒不如...，建议您去掉“rather” ，因为在前面已经有个“more”，在句中已是比较级了。
Going on a diet
Many years ago,people ddi not have enough food to eat.They could not imagine that human beings would go on a diet nowadays.It is a joke.But this situation really exists in our daily life .A lot of girls refuse to eat meat in order to lose weight .They think that “the less weight,the more beauty”.Pelple have different views about it . Some support it ,while others disagree with it.
An old saying goes “Everybody has the mind of beauty”. However,going on a diet too much is harmful to our health.Fat,meat,sugar and so on are important to keep the balance of our body. If we don’t take them for a long time ,we will be lack of nutrition ,and won't have enough