达人帮我看看这个句子的句法对不对?(英语)急。

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/22 07:32:18
The recent two decades have seen an incrsasing emphasis on the debate whether senior people should embrace the newly-invented technology such as E-busness and E-newspaper.

句子跟单词的错误???谢谢 紧急。
但是有没有这个用法呢 :"emphasis on the debate " 我提高悬赏了

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语法没有问题,而且写得不错,将recent two decades拟人化,不过emphasis on the debate这个说法就没见过了,用heat on the debate可能会比较好

over the recent 2 decades we have seen an increased emphasis on the debate ....

语法没问题。