UC知道帮我看看我翻译得对不对。。谢谢
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如果你把注意力集中在学习上，你肯定能实现你的目标，成为一名成功的学生。。
If you concentrte on your study,you must be reach your goal, becoming a succefful student.
只要帮我改错，我 must be这里和becoming这里不太清楚，不知道是否对不对。。。谢谢。
If you concentrte on your study,you must be reach your goal, becoming a succefful student.
只要帮我改错，我 must be这里和becoming这里不太清楚，不知道是否对不对。。。谢谢。
你用if，是不是主将从现？
如果是，你后面应该是将来时，用will become。。。
must be
必须
becoming
成为
如果你把注意力集中在学习上，你肯定能实现你的目标，成为一名成功的学生。。
If you focus on learning, you will certainly be able to achieve your goal, to become a successful student. .
(Google翻译，仅供参考)
must 改成 will be
becoming 改成 and you will become ..
还有 是successful不是succefful