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This is to certify that xxx, Male, born in 1986, he has studied in International Trade Major of Nanjing Normal University since 2005，and is hereby a senior student. He will graduate in 2009，and will be awarded the Bachelor's Degree of International Trade.
说明：有两处改动，1）原稿majors作谓语动词用，语法是对的，但不如稍改动一下，用he重起一句，与后面is hereby的连接也比较自然2）学士学位应该加',3)授予用award应该也可以，但我看到的英文公证书的授予×××学位，用的是confered；4）请到学校了解一下有没有“国际贸易”学位，因为据我了解，学位的设置很粗，比如哲学、经济学、法学、教育学、文学、历史学、理学、工学、农学、医学。否则要出洋相的。我估计你应该属于经济学，所以应该是Bachelor's Degree of Economy。

CERTIFICATE

This is to certify that the student, xxx, male, ages 22, majored in International Trade, xxx University will graduate in March 2008. At that time he will be awarded the Bachelor of science, if he satisfies all the requirements of the Regulations Concerning Academic Degrees in the People's Republic of China.

最后的Regulations Concerning Academic Degrees in the People's Republic of China是结业证书的标准英语写法。

以上的观点是个人意