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题目 should parents be reponsible for children's crimes?
中文：1.青少年犯罪成为社会焦点 父母应该负责
2.父母应该负责的原因
我限时写的，字数正好。毛病很多，见谅
Children's crimes is becoming a serious social problem. Almost every school has different
degree of school violence. Should their parents have no responsibility for children's
crimes? Of course not. Parents must educate their children except feeding them.
Why parents is responsible？（想不出更好的了）First, they don't give their children a lesson
about law. It would be their whole life shame and dirty pot if they crime. Secondly, there
are no efficient communications. (缺乏有效的沟通，好像太中国英语了，不地道) Youngsters must
be very(可以换什么成熟的漂亮又不做作的词儿) nervers at the first time they crime.
unfortunately， their parents don't realize. Third, there is a special situation that is
parents are not good models(好榜样). Wagering,lying and u
Children's crimes is becoming a serious social problem. Almost every school has different
degree of school violence. Should their parents have no responsibility for the children's
crimes? Of course not. Parents must educate their children except feeding them.
There are several reasons why parents are responsible for children's crimes.First, they don't give their children a lesson
about law. It would be their whole life shame and dirty pot if they crime. Secondly, there
are no efficient way of communication (缺乏有效的沟通，好像太中国英语了，不地道) Most of the time youngsters must
be very(可以换什么成熟的漂亮又不做作的词儿) nervers when they first crime.
Unfortunately， their parents don't realize this. Third, there is a special situation that is
parents are not good models(好榜样). Wagering,lying and using violence are usually acted on
their children.
The solution to solve the problem is start w