那位英语达人帮我修改一下短文？（改好后会再加30分）

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Why me so handsome? When I go out,so many girls look me!When I at the bus station,also have some girls fix she's eyes on me.when I at restaurant,many girls look at me even forget to eat food!I am so handsome!Many girls send rose to me.I am so handsome!So many girls write letters for me.Oh!I am so handsome!why? I do not want to be so handsome.I really do not want to be handsome,what could I do if I do not want to be so handsome?Could you help me?

Why am I so handsome? When I go out,so many girls look at me!When I'm at the bus station, some girls also fix their eyes on me.when I'm at restaurant,many girls look at me even forgot to eat food!I am so handsome!Many girls send roses to me.I am so handsome!So many girls write letters to me.Oh!I am so handsome!why? I do not want to be so handsome.I really do not want to be handsome,what could I do if I do not want to be so handsome?Could you help me?
语法上讲这样应该没错了

Why am I so handsome? When I went out,so many girls stared at me!And when I am at a bus station,still many many girls fixed their eyes on. when I am in a restaurant,many girls looked at me even forgot to eat food!I am so handsome!Many girls sent rose to me.I am so handsome!So many girls write loving letters to me.Oh!I am so handsome!why? I do not want to be so handsome.I really do not want to be handsome,what could I do if I do not want to be so handsome?Could you help me?

Why am I so handsome? When