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Hello! My name is XXX, I was born in XX,XX province, due to outstanding achievements I admitted to the the XX College in 2003, during the school time i studied hard and performance seriously,and also i actively participated in social practice, having scholarships many times. Years of university life has given me enough time to let me learn a lot of useful knowledge. I became a volunteer of XX Company in 2005, mainly responsible for the design and maintenance, during the service time, i completed the company's task successfully, After graduation in 2006,i joined the XXCompany , it founded in 1974, is the first professional manufacturer of disposable medical instrument in China . It is a modern high-tech enterprise of large-scale in domestic blood transfusion technique filed integrating development, production and sales of medical apparatus and supporting instruments. this is a large enterprise, which employs nearly 500 people.I started from the sales
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Hello! My name is XXX; I was born in XX, XX province, due to the outstanding achievements I admitted to the XX University in 2003. During the school years I learned a lot; have good performance and participated in social practices, also getting scholarships many times. The time that I spent in school gives me enough time to learn lots of useful knowledge. In 2005 I became a volunteer of XX Company, mainly responsible for the design and maintenance. During the work time, I completed my job successfully. After graduation in 2006, I joined the XX Company; it’s an international enterprise engaged company which employs 500 people, mainly product XXX. I started as sales and technicians, half year later because of my outstanding achievements, I promoted as a sales manger, mainly responsible for east part of China. In the new position, I still efficient working, create a huge profit to the company while also making myself eligible to become a sales manager. Bu