悬赏高手帮我修改下短小的英语日记

1、I(英文首句第一个单词要大写)
2、 read(read的过去试是原形,但读法不一样)a book last night（夜晚，字母写倒了）.
3、It gave(give的过去试是gave,过去式第三人称不用加s)me a lot of feelings(feel在这里作名词而不是动词) at that moment.
4、The meanings(mean的形容词是meaning)expressed how to pick up young girls.
5、I never smoke and I never angry easyly,(英语的语句习惯一般是前后一至的)and I'm polite to （应该用介词to，表方向，对某人。be polite to sb）anyone.(任何人）
6、So I read that book again and again,there were such meaningful experiences,I learned them hard.(语序，语法，表达应该要更清楚。翻译成：我一遍又一遍地看，有许多有意义的经验，我努力地学着）
7、It isn't only about pick up women(加个词表强调，不仅仅是___和你后面的句子更连惯，意思表达得更清楚)
注意英文中的大小写，过去试，语法语序，希望能够帮到你。

i read a book last nihgt..it gave me a lot of feelings at that moment。
the meanings expressed how to pick up young girls.
i felt heartache.look back, there ain't nothing but mistakes.

i think i'm a nice man.i never smoke and i'm polite to anyone.
never angry easyly.why never have a girl loved me?tell me why?<