帮忙修改英语作文，速度

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My native town is not beijing.I was born in jiangsu .but I was grew up in beijing.so beijing can be my second hometown beijing has colorful history.in many years ago,beijing was a beautiful city.though beijing is also beautiful now,there are more pollutions.and beijing is a crowded city,there are more than 10 millon people in beijing now.beijing also have more scenic palace.such as the great wall,the summer palace,the palace museum and so on.beijing is great now except population.i just like beijing very much.

求各位大侠帮忙修改!必有重谢！
嗯嗯，我初二，明天口头作文

主要框架未动,修改了语法,单词,以及前后矛盾的地方.现在文章上应该没有什么错误,如果是口语的话,我帮您整理成演讲稿了. 不懂的单词您可以用简单词替代.稍微美化了一下.

Good morning guys! My name is …(您的名字) I am so glad to give a speech here. Some of you may know that I am not a native Beijing person. Yes, I was born in Jiangsu. As you see, I have lived in Beijing for many years. I mean I grew up in Beijing. Therefore, Beijing becomes my second hometown. Beijing has a wonderful history. It used to be the capital of China for hundred years till now. Beijing has many scenic palaces, such as Great Wall, Summer Palace, Palace Museum and so on. Many years ago, Beijing has an attracting environment. However, the environment of Beijing is changing now. Pollutions come out and it becomes a crowded city. There are more than 10 million people live in Beijing, and I believe the number will increase. What I want to say is, Beijing is great now, except the population. I love Beijing as well as my hometown.

but I was grew up in beijing 去掉 was

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