UC知道又来一篇雅思作文，望指教，谢谢
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With the extremely rapid development of the society, increasing young people choose to accept the higher education, in order to enhance their competitiveness. Yet, it is indisputable that the tuition is really high, and some family cannot afford it, because of which, personally, I insist that it should be a duty of the government to pay the course fees. In my essay, I will talk about this topic on twofold.
First of all, it benefits individuals a lot to pay the tuition by the governments. We all know, studying is not an easy job to every person, and the one who want to have some achievements in the academic areas must pay a great of efforts. There is no reason to require the students, who are trying their best to get a good result in their study, to earn the large sum of money for their further education. In order to encourage this kind of students to
With the extremely rapid development of the society, increasing young people choose to accept the higher education(此处要点明what is increasing.并且开门见山，指明上大学，而不是higher education,因为国外的higher education不只有university.建议改为：the number of young people choose to enter the university has increased in order to enhance their competitiveness. )
Yet, it is indisputable that the tuition (FEEs) is (are) really high, and some family(families) cannot afford it, because of which, personally, I insist that it should be a duty of the government to pay the course fees. In my essay, I will talk(discuss) about this topic on twofold.
First of all, it benefits individuals a lot to pay the tuition by the governments.(我认为这里应该是条件句：it benefits individuals a lot if the government pays the tuition fee.如果只说政府交学费benefits individuals a lot的话，会让人感觉太泛泛。这个中心句涉及的东西太广，建议你说，例如，Tuition fees pay by government could decrease the burden faced by a family.然后围绕这个小范围展开讨论。) (AS)We all know(known), studying is not