UC知道麻烦了，帮我翻译一下
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well , it is the weakness, then"said the doctor ," i will do all that science , so far as it may filter through my efforts , can accomplish, but whenever my patient begins to count the carriages in her funeral procession i subtract 50 per cent from the curative power of medicines, if you will get her to ask one question about the new winter atyles in coat sleeves i will promise you a one in five chance for her , instead of one in ten
after the doctor had gone sue went into the workroom and cried . then she swaggered into johny's room with her drawing board , whistling .
johnsy's lay,scarcely making a ripple under the bedclothes ,with her face toward the window , sue stopped whistling , thinking she was asleep
after the doctor had gone sue went into the workroom and cried . then she swaggered into johny's room with her drawing board , whistling .
johnsy's lay,scarcely making a ripple under the bedclothes ,with her face toward the window , sue stopped whistling , thinking she was asleep
应该是小说里节选的部分吧，大体上我是按原文翻译的，但有些小地方是意译的，否则读起来太生硬。需要注意的地方都有注解，希望能帮上楼主的忙：
“好吧，这就是突破口（注一）了，那么”医生说道“我会尽力而为（注二）。鉴于目前它（可能指的是疾病）或许能抵抗我的治疗（注三），虽然我们或许还有机会（注四），但是一旦我的病人开始幻想她葬礼上的马车（注五），我会立刻把药力降低50%。不过如果你能让她开始关心冬季上装的流行趋势，那么我就认为有50%而不再是10%的把握能治好她。”
注一：原文是“weakness，弱点”
注二：do all the science = 尽力而为
注三：原文是“躲开我的努力”
注四：这里的“虽然”是我根据上下文加的，因为后面是一个表示让步转折的从句
注五：count the carriages 是“数马车”的意思，表示病人出现幻觉，这里是意译过来的
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补充部分：
医生离开之后，苏（Sue）冲进工作间大叫了起来。然后她吹着口哨、带着画板大步走进强尼（Johny）的房间。
强尼已经睡了，被单之下的他安静得没有任何声响。苏面朝着窗户，不再吹口哨，觉得自己好像睡着了。