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I was born in this word 19years ago. So I knows that everybody’s life will have happiness or sadness. But when I not grow up. I’m surely don’t know why so much unfavorable things always impact my life by evry time . when I had just begun imagine my life will become better. In many times I was in a morose status.So I want take myself in a new height, For this, I start to research how to get me high. Times was quickly losed, but I was take so many times like this, I just realized that every bad luck in my opinion just because I make no efforts. Fortunate, I kowning this things it’s not to late.
It’s time to beginning of efforts.

不好意思~

I was born in this word 19 years ago. So I knows (改为I know) that everybody’s life will have happiness or sadness. But when I not (缺助动词,改为have not grown) grow up. I’m surely don’t know (am和don't know不能作为谓语动词重复出现,要么讲I'm sure not to know;要么改为I surely don't know)why so much unfavorable things always impact my life by (by多余,去掉,every,each, this, that等词如出现在表示时间的名词前不可用介词)every time . when I had just begun imagine (begin 后的动词要用to imagine或imagining)my life will become better. In many times (in times表示经常,相当于often,去掉many)I was in a morose status.So I want take (还是动词连用问题。改为wanted to take)myself in a new height, For this, I start to research how to get me high. Times (times是“时代”,应该改为“时间”time)was quickly losed, but I was take (一是动词连用was take,二是只能说it took me或I spent)so many times like this, I just realized that every bad luck in my opinion just because I make (make要用过去式made) no efforts. Fortunate(realized后面是个宾语从句,但是不完整,从句的主语是 every bad luck ,那么后面的because从句应该是他的表语,所以because前要添加系动词was,即:每