UC知道谁可以帮忙修改英语作文啊？（雅思的）
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The bar chart shows during 1950 to 2000 the population of china, USA and Spain, with the projected population figures for 2050. As the graph shows china has the highest population overall, for instance in 1950 china has the population of 700milion, however, USA has only 200 million people, and even in Spain there were just 30 million. After the next 50 years, china still has the highest population of 1200 million, USA has the population increased to 300 millions, Spain was raise to 30 millions. Whatever, projected population of china in 2050 will be 1500 millions, the fastest growth in those countries. USA get the constant raise of 100 millions to 400 millions. However, Spain decreases its population to 35millions.
The table shows the information of the life expectancy of these three countries from 1950 to 2000, and the projected figures for 2050. Shown on the table, although china has the highest population but it has the lowest life expectancy, around
The bar chart shows during 1950 to 2000 the population of China,the USA and Spain with the projected population figures for 2050. As the graph shows that China has the largest population overall, for instance in 1950 China will have the population of 700 milion, however,the USA has only 200 million people, and even in Spain there were(我不懂为什么要用过去时呢，and 是并列连词，and 的前和后时态应该一直) just 30 million. After the next 50 years, China will still have the largest population of 1200 million,the USA will have the population increases(难道人口会“被增长”吗) to 300 million, Spain will raise to 30 million. Whatever, projected population of China in 2050 will be 1500 million, the fastest growth in those countries.The USA gets the constant raises of 100 millions to 400 millions. However, Spain decreases its population to 35million.
The table shows the information of the life expectancy of these three countries from 1950 to 2000, and the projected figures for 2050. Shown on the table, although China has the l