UC知道诚恳请求大家帮忙修改英语作文
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这是一篇四级考的作文，文章要求是：假如你们学校要举办第一届英语节，你作为学生代表致开幕词。
作文：The Opening Speech of English Festival
Hello everyone.
I’m Andy, chairman of the student union. It’s a great honor for me to stand here to give the opening speech as a student representative.
As we all know, it’ s the first time for our school to hold the English Festival, so let me give you some brief introduction. First, all the students are welcome to enter for the English Festival by full in an application form on the website of our school before May 5th. After that, the contest will be held on May 6th, in the student hall, and we are honored to have invited Mr. Liu, the English teacher, to be the judger. Finally, the top ten students will give a performance on May 10th.
Our school has been putting great attention on the English study of students since it was set up; therefore, it is high time that we took an active part in the English Festival and showed our best. Come on! Don’t be shy. Let us seize the gol
作文：The Opening Speech of English Festival
Hello everyone.
I’m Andy, chairman of the student union. It’s a great honor for me to stand here to give the opening speech as a student representative.
As we all know, it’ s the first time for our school to hold the English Festival, so let me give you some brief introduction. First, all the students are welcome to enter for the English Festival by full in an application form on the website of our school before May 5th. After that, the contest will be held on May 6th, in the student hall, and we are honored to have invited Mr. Liu, the English teacher, to be the judger. Finally, the top ten students will give a performance on May 10th.
Our school has been putting great attention on the English study of students since it was set up; therefore, it is high time that we took an active part in the English Festival and showed our best. Come on! Don’t be shy. Let us seize the gol
A Students" Union B IT IS GREAT HONOR (honor 是不及物动词) D filling in (by后ing) E judge 我是一名今年高中毕业生 见谅
有一个小错误，在最后一句：
“May you enjoy yourselves in the English Festival.”
应改为：“May you enjoy yourselves in the English Festival? ”
brief 改成 short：brief太正式了，通常用于法庭……
gold chance 改成valuable chance:没有“GOLD CHANCE”此用法
语法错误一般是听不出来的
I don't now