急！！看看这篇英语短文语法有错误没

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/22 15:24:12
Now,used in English in their daily lives more and more widely,and the livelihood of our influence is growing. Would say that English is very important now, because we and the world more and more close contact,the world needs us ,we need to understand the world.English is a tool for us to understand the world .I study English in the past ways of the poor at that time,because I did not realize the importance of English.But now I am very active in learning English. I will write not only to overcome the disadvantage that,really good grasp of English.

中文：现在英语在日常生活中用的越来越广泛了，对我们的生活的影响也越来越大，会说英语现在显得很重要，因为我们与世界的联系越来越密切。世界需要我们，我们需要了解世界。英语是我们了解世界的一种工具。我在过去学习英语的方法不好，因为我没意识到英语的重要性。但现在我很积极地学习英语，并会克服只写不说的缺点，真正地掌握好英语
对了 我要做的是英语课上1分钟演讲 如果错误太多 直接翻译成简单点的英语 追分哈

我依据汉语给你翻译一个吧,他们怎么都是翻译的不符合英语的习惯，
now,English is more and more widely used in our daily life and have more and more impact on our life. because we are getting closer and closer with the world，
The world needs us as well as we need to understand the world.
English is a tool with which we understand the world,
in the past ,my English is poor,because I did not realize the importance of English,
But now I am very active in learning English, and I will overcome the shortcomings of that write-only .
I believe ican master English better.
这个是个比觉简单通俗的翻译看看吧

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