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The first place I want to travel to is Iceland. People said Iceland is shaped by fire and ice, because it has more than 200 volcanoes and many glaciers form the country’s landscape. The Iceland is covered with snow and ice but there are many hot springs among the snow and ice. In Iceland, the scenery is so pure and unique, it makes people feel relax. The next country I want to travel to is Switzerland. This country has the best chocolate production and watch production. In Switzerland , the Land area and population is small but the quality of life is high. The other place I want to travel is Barcelona, a beautiful Spanish city near the sea. But the most attractive thing to me is the splendor building which designed by Antoni Gaudi, a architect with great talent.
The Iceland is the first place I want to travel to .there are more than 200 volcanoes and many glaciers form it's landscape, so people said it is shaped by fire and ice.It is covered with snow and ice which have many hot springs inside.In Iceland, the scenery is so pure and unique which makes people feel relax.
The second place is the Switzerland . This country has the best chocolate production and watch production. She has small Land area and population but high quality life .
There are so many places I want to travel include Barcelona,a beautiful Spanish city near the sea, especially to it's splendor building which designed by Antoni Gaudi, a architect with great talent.
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The Iceland is the first place I want to travel to .there are more than 200 volcanoes and many glaciers form it's landscape, so people said it is shaped by fire and ice.It is covered with snow and ice which have many hot springs inside