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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/07 18:38:00
Zhuxi had paid great attention to the ecology when he was an officials in the government. At that time he was in office in Hunan, knew that the forest of Hengshan Mountain had been damaged, then issues an order and posted the bulletin :”Do not disafforest ! take some time, used with restraint.”

Zhuxi had paid great attention to the ecology when he was an official in the government. At that time he was in office in Hunan. When hearing of the news (that) the forest of Hengshan Mountain had been damaged, he announced an order and bulletined : "Do not disafforest! take some time, and exercise restraint."

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