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I like English. My dream is to be an overseas student because I may enjoy scenery and gain much of new knowledge in foreign countries.

I'll learn English well so I could study abroad when I grow up. Once I thought if I want to study abroad, I have to learn several foreign languages. But my mother told me English is most extensively used in the world. If my English is adequate, I could communicate with many foreigners. So I am not worry about it.

At present, I have studied English for more than three years. At first I was very excited, but was afraid I might fail to learn it well because I didn't like to talk to my classmates in English. Now, I am not afraid to do so. The lessons were not as hard as I thought; instead, is was so easy that I could remember many words and terms. And I could speak English well.

My parents often asked me questions in English and I could give them correct answers quickly. I could even talk with my English teacher i

1.Once I thought if I want to study abroad, I have to learn several foreign languages.----Once I thought about learning several foreign languages if I wanted to study abroad.(最好时态一致)

2.If my English is adequate---If I speak good English/If I have a good command of English(语法不错,但是很少有人这么说)
3.So I am not worry about it.---So I am not worried about it.( 要讲worry 换成worried.)
4.but was afraid I might fail to learn it well because I didn't like to talk to my classmates in English.----but I was afraid...(漏了主语I)
5.My parents often asked me questions in English---My parents often ask me questions in English..(用一般现在式就可以了)
希望你坚持用英文写作.祝福!

because I may enjoy scenery and gain much of new knowledge in foreign countries.
may--->can gain much of new knowledge-->gain much more new knowledge
I'll learn English well so I could study abroad when I grow up.
-->I must learn English well so I can study abroad when I grow up.

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