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My summer vacation
In fact, I don’t think I had a good vacation. I studied the whole vacation. It was really tired. In July, I studied Chinese, math, English and physics. The weather was very hot. But 7.18 was a terrible day! The rain was so heavily that I couldn’t back home until 20:00. In August, I studied New Concept English. It was really very difficult! Oh my god, I was busy with studying and I forgot to do my homework. I had to finish my homework in a few days. Nothing could have been more annoying! The lucky thing was, the homework wasn’t too much.
In fact, I don’t think I had a good vacation. I have been studying all the vacation. It was really tired. In July, I learned Chinese, math, English and physics. It was very hot. But 7.18 was a terrible day! The rain was so heavy that I couldn’t go back home until 20:00. In August, I had New Concept English. It was really difficult! Oh my god, I was busy with studying and I forgot my homework.So I had to finish my homework in few days. Nothing couldn't have been more annoying! Luckily, the homework wasn’t too much.
我觉得问题不少 很多地方感觉很别扭……
问题呢？看不到问题。
vacation度假比较常用。holiday比较好吧。
数学，物理都要大写。雨很大是heavy，couldn't go back home
it was really difficult. very和really重复。
busy with studying把with去掉比较好。虽然你那样也不算错。
i had to finish...前头加个so啊什么的比较好。
nothing could be more annoying.那个时态用在这里比较怪。
The rain was so [ heavily ] －HEAVY
back home 前面最好加GO
其他没问题
The rain was so heavily 这里的heavily改为heavy，heavy可以做副词也可以做形容词，这里是用形容词来修饰rain