UC知道帮我看看下面这段话有什么语法错误或者其它不好的，很短的
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The day before that day,my mom,cousin and I went to a flower shop to by some flowers.one rose is 4 yuan,we bought 30 roses.
Next day morning,my cousin and I were ready for selling flowers to sweeties.we didn’t know how many they would buy,but we had confdence.
There were a lot of people on the street.most of them were sweeties.first,we helped the flowers to dressed.we put some pieces colorful paper on the branches.as far as I know,we should cut the withered petals.that made the roses more beautiful.
Next day morning,my cousin and I were ready for selling flowers to sweeties.we didn’t know how many they would buy,but we had confdence.
There were a lot of people on the street.most of them were sweeties.first,we helped the flowers to dressed.we put some pieces colorful paper on the branches.as far as I know,we should cut the withered petals.that made the roses more beautiful.
第一行的one那个O要大写
第三行The next morning
第三行的selling flowers to sweeties说不清楚是什么意思？是以卖花赚钱去买糖吃吗？
第四行的最后一个单词应该是confidence.
第五行most的M要大写
第六行to be dressed
第六行we的W要大写
第六行pieces of colorful paper
第七行as far as的第一个as的A要大写
第七行As far as I known
第七行we had cut the withered petals，但前面用as far as来连接好像怪怪的，意思表达不清楚了。
第八行roses were more beautiful
1.前面可以就改成 one day ,后面用the next day.不然好像不够清楚．
2. but we have confidence.貌似是Chinenlish.而且意思表达不清楚．这里仅给个参考． but i believed that we chould do a good job.
3.第3段里的first有点问题．因为你后面没有下一步怎么样，显得多余．
4.some pieces colorful paper 改成 some colorful pieces of paper
（5.have sth dressed 不知道这里能不能用．）
6.最后一句我看不太懂（是我自己的原因），不过我觉得句子可以变成：as far as I know,we should cut the withered petals，which makes the roses more beautiful.
*总的表达有点中式的感觉.但我改得也不一定对．仅做个参考吧