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My experiments in studying English

Foreign language study is a popular topic in recent years. Different people have different ways and manners in study(in study 可以不要). I have studied（studying） English off and on for ten years. My major is Arabic in university(in university可以不要). I summarized some experiments in studying English and Arabic. Although the two languages are extremely distinct, the methods of study are the same. I classify the study to the following three stages:
Firstly, at the beginning of study, we only study letters ,words and simply conversations .In this period, recitation from memory is the best and the most useful way of study. I learned the common words and sentence patterns by heart and read sentences and lessons everyday .In my opinion; it is the essential stage that no one can stride over.
Secondly, after I acquired some foundational knowledge, not only I recite words and sentence patterns, but I（不要I吧） also read some English masterpieces and

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My experiments in studying English

Foreign language study is a popular topic in recent years. Different people have different ways and methods. I have studied English off and on for ten years. I majored Arabic in university. I summarized some experience in studying English and Arabic. Although the two languages are extremely distinct, the methods of study are similar. I classify the study to the following three stages:
Firstly, at the beginning of study, we only study letters ,words and simply conversations .In this period, recitation is the best and the most useful way of study. I learned the common words and sentence patterns by heart , as well as read sentences and lessons everyday. In my opinion; it is the essential stage that no one can stride over.
Secondly, after acquiring some foundational knowledge, I was able to no only recite words and sentence patterns, but read some English masterpieces, w