帮看下这样翻译合适么?谢谢!~

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/02 08:42:14
这些句子我自己翻译了一下,不知道合适不。或者告诉我下更简单的。考试用。谢谢
如果明天天气晴朗,他将带他女友去海滩玩。
If the weather was fine tomorrow, he will take his girlfriend to the beach to play.
当他是个年轻小伙子的时候,他对自己的言行非常敏感。
When he was a young man when he is very sensitive to the words and deeds of their own.
他对一位女孩特别感兴趣,经常同她一起去上海大剧院。
He particularly interested in a girl, often with her to the Shanghai Grand Theatre.
他一说完要说的话,旁边的那个伙伴便兴奋至极,哈哈大笑。
He finished one point, the partnership that will be next to the extreme excitement, laughs.
那个男孩那天不愿去上课,他父母不得不反复催促他上学。
That boys do not want to go to class that day, his parents had repeatedly urged him to school.
同学们散坐在教室的各处讨论问题,就在这时他们老师进来了。
Sitting in the classroom the students scattered throughout the discussion, at this point in time their teachers to come through.
我去年买了这幢房子,所欠房款还未付清。
I bought the house last year, owed by the housing fund have not yet paid.
我的朋友向我点点头,然后仔细考虑我提出的问题。
My friend told me nodded, and then I

如果明天天气晴朗,他将带他女友去海滩玩。
If the weather was (应该是is) fine tomorrow, he will take his girlfriend to the beach to play.
(If it is fine tomorrow, he will go to the beach together with his GF.)
当他是个年轻小伙子的时候,他对自己的言行非常敏感。
When he was a young man when he is very sensitive to the words and deeds of their own.
(When he was a young man, he was quite sensitve to his own words and behaviors.)
他对一位女孩特别感兴趣,经常同她一起去上海大剧院。
He particularly interested in a girl, often with her to the Shanghai Grand Theatre.
(He holds a special interest with a girl, and often go to the Shanghai Grand THeatre with her.)
他一说完要说的话,旁边的那个伙伴便兴奋至极,哈哈大笑。
He finished one point, the partnership that will be next to the extreme excitement, laughs.
(The moment he had finish what he wanted to say, the guy beside was extreme excited, and burst into laughter.)
那个男孩那天不愿去上课,他父母不得不反复催促他上学。
That boys do not want to go to class that day, his parents had repeatedly urged