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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/01 19:41:11
Today I got up too early.It is a beatiful day .
Homework was finished yesterday so I can do everything what I like.I went to play basketball with my friends.They played very well and I was so-so .Two hours later,all of us felt tired but happy .I haven't play basketball for a long time,so today I really felt very excited .I think it is my fawourate day.

too early too表过于的意思 应该用so
I was so-so 前面实义动词这不能用be动词
play改played
fawourate估计你打错了

有点别扭 事态好像不太统一啊~

完全是中文翻译过来,读起来句子结构是中国式的,调整一下。I haven't play---played