这句话有误吗?能改更好的句型吗?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/30 13:41:11
I was born in China, an ancient country with a venerable civilization of more than 5000 years and various wonders of the world here range from constructions to water conservancy projects.

I was born in China, an ancient country with venerable civilization of more than 5000 years and various wonders of the world ranging from constructions to water conservancy projects.

一点小错误,帮你改了。这句话用词很好,很地道

楼上改的不好,and之后就是一句话了,这句话怎能没有谓语动词呢 试问ranging能做谓语吗
这句话虽然用词地道但句法不好,感觉好象衔接的不太紧密而且civilization of more than 5000 years似乎改为civilization with history of 5,000 years 更好一些
and 之后的句子和上文没有关系,好象没有说完,似乎改为
and there are many various wonders of the world here ranging from constructions to water conservancy projects.
略陈固陋,全当抛砖引玉