帮我看看这面这些话有没有什么错误

I tried to forget these days because i really hate growing up. I used to expect my birthday a lot because of birthday cake and gifts. Now, i am 23, and i miss the days gone by.

文章中有不少错误， 想给你用下划线划出来， 但是， 复制到了这里这些线又都没有了． 如果一个一个解释错误和原因， 可能要写上好多了． 请对照原文， 基本在你的原文上改的， 也没有改动你的句子和语序．

I try to forget this day because I really don't like to grow up.
The time before，I was always hoping for my birthday，because of the birthday cake and the gifts.
I am already 23 years old. I miss the past time so much.

I'm tried to - I'm tring to
I was always hoping - 最好别这么用,be always doing 有一种隐含的厌烦的意思,可以说I has always hoped
I already 23 years old. - I am already 23 years old.

i have tried to forget this day because i do not really like growing up.
i am already 23 years old. i am missing the past time so much.