雅思书信作文，请帮忙看看，并修改

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/16 16:19:27
Assume that you wish to study in England, write a letter of inquiry based on your interests. Ask what kind of clubs there are at the university, and what is the procedure for joining them.

Dear Sir,
I am a Chinese citizen who wishes to study at your university. My plan is start my course next term. However, I would like to join clubs based on my interests, so I would be grateful if you would be so kind as to provide me with certain essential information.

First, what kinds of clubs are there at the university? I am interested in climbing, and I wonder if there are any climbing club requirements. If so, could you tell me how to get the qualification of becoming a climbing club membership? Second, how much is the fees when I joining in the club, is there any possible discount for me? I expect you could consider my membership I have been in china and give me a permit to assess the club without any agreement, and also, give me some discount to some extent. Third,

改过的了
Dear Sir,
I am a Chinese student who wish to study at this university. I am planning to start my courses in next term. However, I would like to join some clubs based on my interests, and I would be grateful if you would provide the essential information for me.

First, what kinds of clubs are there at the university? I am interested in mountain climbing, so I wondered if there is any climbing club requirement. If so, could you tell me how to get the qualification of becoming a climbing club member? Second, how much is the fees when I join in the club, is there any possible discount for me? I expect you could consider my membership that I have been in china and give me a permit to assess the club without any agreement, and also, give me some discount to some extent. Third, can you tell me what I need to submit when I apply to the climbing club? I hope all the procedure is not inconvenient.

I am looking forward your reply, and to attending the es