修改一段话(英文) 万分感谢....各位大大!~

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Cash flow problems can be short-term and temporary, which means a business may need short-term finance to pay its bills and to keep its suppliers happy. Hence, there have some solutions for short-term cash problems, including trade credit, bank overdraft and sale of assets. First, trade credit is the simplest form of external financing, and it is common for suppliers to offer their customers 30 days credit to pay for goods and services they have received. What’s more, although some suppliers may offer a discount for paying quickly, trade credit is very attractive to businesses because it is free. However, the disadvantage may be reluctant to trade with the business if they do not get paid in good time. Second, bank overdraft is the commonest form of borrowing for small businesses, the banks allows the firm to overdraw up to an agreed limit for a negotiated period of time. The advantage of bank overdraft is that it is very flexible and easy

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As for cash flow problems, they can be short-term and temporary. It means a business may need short-term finance to pay its bills and to keep its suppliers happy. Therefore, some solutions can be made for short-term cash problems, including trade credit, bank overdraft and sale of assets. Among them, trade credit is the simplest form of external financing. Suppliers can offer their customers 30 days credit to pay for goods and services they have received. Furthermore, although some suppliers may offer a discount for paying quickly, trade credit is very attractive to businesses because it is free. However, there are some disadvantages. Customers may be reluctant to trade with the business if they do not get paid in good time. Second, bank overdraft is the commonest form of borrowing for small businesses because the banks allow the firm to overdraw within an agreed limit for a negotiated period of time. The advantage of bank overdraft is its flexibility and easiness to