语法错误有没有?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/27 11:34:56
问看到这个问题的朋友,这篇文章哪里有语法错误,帮忙指出,在恳请各位提出好的建议,thank you very much.
I love nature,because the nature is vitality.But how do we to protect it?
First,we should start from a petty thing. for example,put the trash into the trash bin.Second, to keep other people ruin the environment.Only this way, Our sky can become more and more blue,our earth can become more and more green,our nature can become more and more good.

(1)But how do we to protect it?
我的看法是可能用But how do we protect it 或 But how to protect it 或 But what can we do to protecct it 会比较好
(2)to keep other people ruin the environment中应用keep sb from doing 的词组表示阻止某人做什么事
(3)Only this way 应用Only in this way
(4) Our sky can become more and more blue 其中more and more blue应为bluer
(more and more 用在多音节前)同理more and more green应为greener more and more good.应为better

加油啊

vitality is a noun
how do we protect it
a petty thing to some petty things
throw````````into
keep other people from criming against the environment
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实际上要我说这篇文可以重写了
完全的chinglish啊·······因为不是英语专业的,所以不对你有标点的要求

1 Because the nature is full of vitality.
2 throw the trash into the trash bin.
3 Second,to keep other people from polluting the environment.
4 Only in this way,can our sky become more and more bluer,the earth become more and more greener,can our nature become mor