帮我看下有没有什么语法错误。。谢谢。

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My super hero is Kuroro Rushiru. Suddenly, I can’t start. Even though I want to talk about Kuroro, as night and general deep man.
But all thoughts in my mind are pestering.
Is this like the feeling of nothing more to say as well as loving so deeply?
I admire him for his composure and sagacity. He showed great composure in diffcult situations.
Kuroro has very meticulous inference.
He is a inborn leader and he is also a overmatch.
He is invincible.

He is the predominant God who can penetrate the susceptibilities in humanity,owning the black wings.
In a flash moment,I seemd to see the darkness stabbed by nothing even through sunshine.
The darkness is out of this world, belonging to the deepness in the heart, never ended.
That is the color approaching the God.

Kuroro Rushiru.
The prince of darkness.
The king of the night.

帮我好好看看吧。。。
我怀疑都是错误。。。
as night and general deep man. 如同黑夜一般的男人。

我怀疑都是错误。。。
的确有很多
语法不是大问题, 问题在用词都不清不楚

as night and general deep man. - 是甚麽?
all thoughts in my mind are pestering. ?
meticulous inference ?