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The first Olympic Games date back to the year 776BC in Greece. Till now, thousands of years has passed, the Olympic Games is still on. Disasters, wars both can’t stop its step; power, unwisdom both can’t change its direction.
Olympic, the sacred event belongs to the whole world, it just like a string, holds all of us together, firmly. Different colors of skin, different races, different languages, different customs, there is not even one force can be as strong as the spirit of Olympic, why? There is only one reason; we all have a same dream, a dream of the Olympics----Peaceful, harmony and United.
The dream has existed for many years. And now, the Olympic torch will come to China and the fire of Olympic will burn on the ground of China! The dream of Olympic will stay in the sky of Beijing, China!
Beijing, the capital city of China, will be the hero of the dream 2008 Olympic Games. All the people around the world with have the special dr
给你修改了一下,写的内容还是不错的,不过我怀疑是对照中文一句句翻译的,太多中国式的表达了. 注意时态和主谓一致的错误,很不错的文章. 我的能力有限.
One World One Dream
The first Olympic Games date(时态) back to the year 776BC in Greece. Till now, thousands of years has(时态) passed, the Olympic Games is still on. Disasters, wars both(both xx and xx) can’t stop its step(复数); power, unwisdom both can’t change its direction.
Olympic, the sacred event belongs to the whole world, it(去掉it) just like a string, holds(holding,其实不如用put,我没见过hold together这个用法) all of us together, firmly. Different colors of skin, different races, different languages, different customs, there is not even one(there is no句式比较好) force can be as strong as the spirit of Olympic, why? There is only one reason; we all have a same dream, a dream of the Olympics----Peaceful, harmony and United.
The dream has existed (为什么不用be kept,exist这个词小心点用)for many years. And now, the Olympic torch will come to China and the fire of Olympic will burn on the ground of China!(火炬已经到中国